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I think the ant world described in “Departmental,” by Robert Frost is a
fitting metaphor for the society in the story, “’Repent, Harlequin!’ Said the
Ticktockman,” by Harlan Ellison. The ant society in “Departmental” is based on
keeping up with the pace and getting all of their duties done. An ant comes
across another ant that has passes away and thinks to himself that if he runs
across someone that works for the higher master he’ll tell him about it.
Insinuating that if he doesn’t run into anyone he is not going out of his way to
let anyone know about. The ants are described as “being a curious race, [but are
not] impressed” or bothered by their dead. (715) The ant society is described or
portrayed as one that is very “departmental.” If you are a mere worker that is
what you do. It is not your job to do the work of those above you. If there is
something that needs to be done, but is beyond your level you are to keep on
with your own duties and not get of track by taking care of the matters of those
above you or below you. In addition to the characteristics of the societies in
both stories being similar they are both science fiction stories. “Departmental”
is based on a society of ants and “Repent, Harlequin!” is about a society that
takes place in the future.
“’Repent, Harlequin!’ Said the Ticktockman”
illustrates a futuristic society governed by time. In 2389, when the story takes
place, man has become so obsessed with punctuality, that if one does not posses
this quality, he can be punished by death. Those who become heroes and strive to
save the world from destruction by the clock become enemies because they are
non-conformists. This is the case for Everett C. Marm, or better known as the
Harlequin, who tries in vain to transform the unacceptability of the
regulations. There are many ways in which people respond to society, some follow
without question and others do what they feel is right, despite the
consequences. The reader sees that many in society have transformed into
followers of the status quo. Ellison used imagery to display the Harlequin’s
rebellion as well as the societies actions and thoughts. In illustrating the
robot-like lives of his society, Ellison wrote, “He could hear the metronomic,
left-right-left of the 2:47 shift, entering the Timkin roller-bearing plant in
their sneakers… he heard the right-left-right of the 5:00 AM formation, going
home.” (396) This quote shows the punctuality of the people, as well as the
organization of the strict society they live.
The shift was not 2:45, but rather
exactly 2:47, not sooner or later. In addition, the workers that were arriving
took steps “left-right-left” whereas the ones going home walked
“right-left-right.” This allegorizes exactly how over-organized society was.
There was so much control over the people that they no longer did what they
wanted to, or what they felt was right. They automatically did what law said to,
forgetting their own feelings and opinions on whether or not the laws were
morally correct. When Marshall Delahauty had received his “turn-off message,” he
tried to escape. As he ran away, “his heart stopped, and the blood dried up on
its way to his brain, and he was dead that’s all.” (401) This shows the reader
the extreme control of the Ticktockman. He had the power to end the lives of
people as he pleased. Not only that, we are shown the insignificance of these
people in society, which is seen when the author wrote, “and he was dead that’s
all.” (401) His death is portrayed to be insignificant. Society was so
brainwashed that they were dehumanized as well. They no longer cared or felt
anything for another human being. They death of a relative was no longer
important. When Harlequin spilled jellybeans all over the city, the people had a
small glimpse of what the world and their lives could be. “Jelly beans! Millions
and billions of purples and yellows and greens…round and smooth and crunchy
outside and soft-mealy inside…bouncing jouncing tumbling clattering skittering
fell on the heads and shoulders…entering a universe of sanity and metronomic
order with quite-mad coocoo newsness.” (397) The jellybeans brought a happiness
that most had never known, and it was a nice seven minute break for them to see
what the possibilities are when not playing by the books. Ellison is showing us
that we refrain from conforming because without reforms, no progress would be
made in life. In order to keep track of the populace and control the amount of
life one was allowed, each person had their set own of a “time-card and
cardioplate.” (399) These were futuristic inventions that signify the control
that the Ticktockman had over his people
. In addition, many futuristic terms
were used to illustrate how society functioned. From “slidewalks” to
“coffee-bulbs” to “fax boxes,” Ellison shows the manner in which society was
managed. Furthermore, Ellison used diction to show the importance of time in the
Ticktockman’s society. An example is when the workers were climbing to their
construction platforms “releasing their a-grav plates, rising toward the
Harlequin.” ( These people were so obsessed with saving time, that they would
shorten their words. Rather than say anti-gravity, they would say “a-grav” in
order to save time. Similarly, the systematic schedules of these people are
shown by the “Thursday colors” that people wore. They were so completely
reformed that they had a set style of dress for every day of the week. This
illustrates how brainwashed the society had become. Harlan Ellison used
characterization to portray the lives of the three different kind of people in
this society; those who serve society with bodies, their conscience, and their
intellect, in hope to help the reader better understand the idea of revolution
and serving society. The men who served “with their bodies” were the populace,
represented by pretty Alice, who “want[ed] to belong, want[ed] to conform.”
(395) These people live by the rules of others, not thinking for themselves. The
second kind of people was the men who served with their consciences as the
Harlequin did. This man followed what he felt was moral, not what the
Ticktockman dictated.
He explained, “It’s a terrible world,” (400) showing that
unlike the others, he did have an opinion on the society. The last kind of
people in the story is the men who served with their intellect, in this case the
Ticktockman. He made destructive choices in order to remain on time and keep
everyone on task, though many were not necessarily ethical. He explained to the
Harlequin, “You’ve used up everything you can, and more. I’m going to turn you
off.” (402) This showed what a tyrant the Ticktockman was, and how he never used
his sensitivity in making decisions. The Harlequin is compared to other
revolutionaries showing his impact upon society, “He was considered a Bolivar; a
Napoleon; a Robin Hood; a Dick Bong (Ace of Aces); a Jesus; a Jomo Kenyatta.”
(396) Just like the Harlequin, none of these revolutionaries came from the
ruling class, yet all made an impact. Also, they were thought of abnormal and
strange because of their con-conformist ideas. The “order” of society did not
appeal to the Harlequin. The Harlequin was a non-conformist, who spent an
alarming “sixty-three years, five months, three weeks, two days, twelve hours,
forty-one minutes, fifty-nine seconds, point oh three six one microseconds” of
his life arriving late, and causing tardiness among others. (402) This
“criminal” was merely trying to enjoy his life and descry others to follow his
lead. Those who served society with their bodies included the ferrets, the
loggers, the commex, the mineez as well as pretty Alice. The society in 2389 was
so infatuated with the concept of order, that every day would entice a different
color of clothing. These contrary colors allowed the citizens to shop once day
per week, which in turn created more order.
For had someone decided to shop a
different day than assigned, time would be lost and the “master schedule” would
become delayed. The phrase “Ostrich-walking” depicts the workers as emotionless
and isolated in would which they do not understand. And, what is not understood
must be destroyed according to their ruler, the Ticktockman. Since nobody
understands the Harlequin, he must be destroyed. Ellison characterizes the
Ticktockman as a tyrant, who has no feeling or emotion. The Ticktockman is very
respectful of his government. Ellison relates his characters to those of
Thoreau’s excerpt. In the excerpt, “The mass of men serve the state… as
machines, with their bodies.” (395) It is interesting how Ellison uses his
creativity to relate his fictitious characters to those of real life, where as
Thoreau views the men merely as machines rather than people. Ellison’s
descriptions of society and the people who inhabit it help the reader understand
that rebellions can be honorable if their cause is moral, as in this short
story. Ellison makes the point that in life people view those who think
differently as evil. The Harlequin was a “dangerous criminal” because he was not
like the rest of them. By using these rhetorical devices, Ellison get his point
across to the reader that anyone can make a difference in society so long as the
person does not conform. With these three tools, the struggle between punctual
society and the non-conformists is brought to life. Ellison wanted to make it
clear that with out reform society and life will remain stale and stagnant. I
think he uses the future as a basis for his story to convey that if we do not
make changes today things will only continue to get worse.
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